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教研会赛课题目——托福独立写作:分层写作法

热度 1已有 588 次阅读2017-12-14 16:21 |系统分类:托福| 托福, 写作

在教研会上我的题目是托福写作:分层写作法的讲解,具体的讲解方法如下:

Do you agree or disagree:
It is better to take action than to wait in patience. 
分层讨论法:
1.在学业上
2.在事业上  
3.在家庭上 
TS+SE(E+C)+EG+S
If my father had not taken his action and chased my mother restlessly, they would not have merged as a family, and I would not have had chance to be sitting here and writing this essay.
If Beethoven had been required to study Math, there would have been no musical mater in this world. 
If Bell had known his invention would be used during the second world war, he would not have anounced the whole world his invention, and the industry of communication would have been seriously damaged.  

Do you agree or disagree:
The advertising is the main cause of people's eating habit. 
反驳绝对词:(反驳绝对词的文章,必须每一段加入和题目的对比)
never, best, most, impossible, main, too... to... 
1. 快节奏的生活
2. 自控力偏弱
3. 对美丽的追求
4. 地域性的饮食习惯

分层写作法:
1. 对于小孩子 快餐广告 
2. 对于青年人 外卖广告/减肥美容广告(cutting down the food intake)
3. 老年人 营养品广告

1. 个人 2. 家庭 3. 国家
1. 学生 3. 老师 3. 学校 4。家长

开头的模板:
So fast is tempo of modern life and so fierce is competition that each individual needs to find proper ways to release the burden caused by tight working schedule. Although some people may think 我的对立面 possesses some benefits, since 理由, I still belive that ... 

结尾的写作方法:
总结文章逻辑性:
To conclude, the life of most people is consisted by mainly distinctively different three phases, beginning with studying as a student to working as an employee and end with a member in a family. It is abundant clear that taking action will enable people to stand out during each period of life. Therefore, it has every reason to conclude that taking prompt action is what people should do in the whole life. 
让步反驳:(用于在文章的body段没有写过让步反驳)
It is admitted that ads indeed causes some disturbing cases of forming undesirable eating habit, because industry of ads has vigorously developed for decades here. However, comparing to other three reasons, ranging from life with fast tempo to pursuit for a nice figure to desire of a prolonged lifespan, may contribute more to formulate an adverse dietary habit. 

Do you agree or disagree:
Universities should encourage the students to learn the more practical subjects such as STEM, instead of the subjects they intereted in. 
1. 使得学生能够找到好工作,为家人奠定好的物质生活。(lay a solid material foundation for their family)
2. 这些专业的热门反映了国家和社会的需求,更好的服务社会。 
提建议的Body段:
3. 提建议:只能关怀的鼓励,不能强制。

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回复 tangningning 2017-12-18 12:59
很新颖的话题,可以借鉴

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